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Yeina motion

Published: Jan 21, 2010

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Yeina in a freeze image, I tried to stop the time, maybe like a phantom camera, the motion stooped in the exact moment. Hope you like it!!!!!!!

The process work and the steps here!!!!

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6000x9000px 9.45 MB

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rox4eva

Feb 23, 2010

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_{hello there ^~^ this is my first official critique, so I hope I do it right- you reserve the right to skewer me later for it.

from the top: it looks wicked! the pose is very fluid, contributing greatly to your 'in motion' concept and you've definitely mastered that in this picture.I've seen many poses similar, but this one still holds a heap of originality in it, which is good.

though I do have some negatives about it. three, to be exact, but one of them is probably just my taste.
mostly points that I've noticed- her fingers on her right hand (the outstretched one, just to be clear) seem a little thin compared to the thumb and the rest of the arm, which in turn distorts the proportions by just a bit. her other hand is fine though, so I didn't think it would be bony structure, but if it is, don't stab me please.
next is her front foot. it's not a biggie and probably just the different art style that we use, but it seems just a tad too round and bent towards the floor. for me, this takes away that great line the leg is portraying, uhm, and gives it a bendy feeling for me. on the other side though, it make her look more like a ballerina, which is what she might be imposing, and if so, kills off that point as well.

the one thing where it's probably just me is her breast. don't get me wrong though- GREAT, great motion, especially with the bouncing -I envy how you make that look so effortless- but her right boob seems a little stretched. of course, this comes with big boobs naturally when in motion, but then her top doesn't look as though when it's not flattering about it wouldn't cover her boobs much, which would reach down quite low then. it doesn't seem... fitting.

negative out of the way, I just LOVE her pants and the detail of her belt. it's not much, but this exact simplicity is what impacts just so so much, and I love it. again, her pants are very fluidly in motion, and I do have to congratulate you on the folds, because they're GORGEOUS.
her shirt- no words I can currently come up with can even START on how wickedly awesome it looks.

her expression is just perfect. it's playful, it's sexy, it's awesome! really conveys how she's having fun, whatever she may be doing.
I do like her hair. A LOT. because it's all flowing up, it just contributes greatly to the motion of the entire pic itself. not to mention that you make me very jealous color-wise.

I do have to point out the background, because it's also a very important thing. it's simply, but yet complicated. her placement is perfect. even though it have been obvious, I'll still put it up- because it does get looked over a lot.

color-wise, I love how simple you kept it. very few, nicely blended colors and shades. again, you make it look absolutely effortless and easy, which makes this seem so casual, like she is.

overall, I think it's a gorgeous piece of work, and I would so totally buy this and hang it up my wall- if I had money.

AWESOME! ~<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart - "/>}